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The Look Of A Letter

Written by: Ilise Benun

Article Overview: Many people never even read their mail. How can you make your letter stand out so that it gets opened?

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The Look Of A Letter

Once a week, usually on a Sunday evening, I actually sit down and read the week's mail. That's the only time I have to focus my attention on it — and I'm one of the more conscientious ones. I've seen enough offices with piles of unopened mail to know that I'm not the norm.

So keeping in mind that most people don't ever read much of their mail, know that in order to get your message across, you need to focus as much on the graphics of your letter as on the content. For example, if a letter isn't skimmable, if the paragraphs are too thick, the copy too dense, no matter what it says, it may not be read. In fact, you could be giving away money, and it wouldn't matter.

Veteran copywriter Don Hauptman offers these suggestions:
1. Don't use a dizzying variety of fonts, type sizes or graphics just because you can. When people open an envelope, they expect to see a letter, with its familiar conventions. The personal communication may be an illusion, but it's one that most of us have come to expect.

2. Write short paragraphs. To avoid a gray wall of type that discourages reading, paragraphs shouldn't be more than seven lines. A visual and dramatic break can be provided by an occasional paragraph of one sentence, one line or even one word.

3. Use familiar attention devices.

Underscore key words and sentences with a continuous line.

Use bullets of any shape to set off an easy-to-read list of benefits or past clients.

Use subheads, set in a slightly larger type size, to break up the copy.

Use inset paragraphs, centered and blocked, to call attention to an important point.

4. Handwrite something. People used to be afraid that handwriting anything on a business letter would make it look unprofessional. Now, the opposite is true. Handwriting a P.S. or even the salutation on a generic letter lets your prospect know there's a human being behind the computer; it's a sign of life that people desperately need in this era of pseudo-personalized everything.

5. Less is more. Don't write more than one page if you can help it. Don't send something that will be eligible for the To Read pile.

6. Always use a P.S. It's the first read (and the most read) element of a letter. Use it to either restate your main point, just in case your reader missed it, or to highlight a premium offer or major benefit.

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About the Author: Ilise Benun
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Ilise Benun is an author, consultant, national speaker and co-founder of Marketing Mentor. Her books include “The Designer’s Guide to Marketing and Pricing" (HOW Design Books, Spring 2008), “Stop Pushing Me Around: A Workplace Guide for the Timid, Shy and Less Assertive” (Career Press 2006), “The Art of Self Promotion” (2007) "Self-Promotion Online" and "Designing Web Sites:// for Every Audience" (HOW Design Books). Her work has been featured in national publications such as HOW Magazine, Inc. Magazine, Nation’s Business, Self, Essence, Crains New York Business, Dynamic Graphics, The New York Times, Toronto Globe and Mail, The Washington Post, The Denver Post and more. Benun publishes a blog www.marketingmixblog.comand a weekly email newsletter, Quick Tips from Marketing Mentor! which is read by 8000+ small business owners. Benun started her Hoboken, NJ-based consulting firm in 1988 and has been self-employed for all but 3 years of her working life.

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